This new character is based off an article I read about the Rebecca riots, where the rioters were said to have been visited by an English nobleman, dressed all in white and on horseback who pledged his support to their cause. Considering I could find no other mention of him in anything about the riots, or even find the original article I read, I don't really think he was all that important of a character.
I also felt that Ludd leaning over Swing like that made him seem like the leader, and while the movement took it's name from him, he was just a simpleton who broke a machine in a fit of anger.
This one is just a simple re-arrangement of the original trio, but I think it solves all the major problems with my first draft.
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