The luddites around a table, drinking and cheering as Swing writes his letters
Captain Swing nailing a letter to a door, and then standing back to admire his handiwork as everything is consumed by fire
Luddites looking over Swing's shoulder as he writes, with a closeup on his letter
The third idea is the one I have the most problems with. The first page seems fine, but the closeup on the letter seems incredibly boring. The second seems visually fine to me, but I don't like the narrative making Swing seem like a misguided idiot. If he was real he would likely have been a destitute and desperate farmer, out of work and probably angry he could no longer provide for his family. Of them all I think the first idea would probably work best, the only real issues I can think of being the lack of anything in the background, and too many people around the table crowding the image.
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