Final Spread

Here is my final spread, going from lineart, to coloured, to shaded:

While I am pleased with the end result, there are some things I dislike about it and that I would change if I I could do it again. The most major of these being the lack of texture. I had been planning on adding a watercolour texture to my work, but at the last minute I found out all of my texture files
had been corrupted.

I also think there is not enough contrast in the shaded image. If I'd had more time I would have liked to add more solid black to the character's shadows. As it stands I feel like the background is too dark in comparison to the people, or the people are too bright. I would have liked to add some more contrast to the image.

I also feel the far right of the image doesn't really serve a purpose, just being a bit of table with nothing on it or behind it. If my submission didn't have to be a certain size I think I would have just cropped it off.